THE MUM pt 1

Hi there this is my learning about THE MUM. My story is based on a mum that came from the dead.
Pt1

THE MUM 

Chapter 1: Walking in the forest

Ruby and Jenner were walking in the forest all alone. Jenner the oldest was holding a teddy bear of hers in her hand. Ruby the youngest was scared to death of the forest fog everywhere, trees with no leaves dark forest, nowhere to go JUST Silence! Walking DEEP into the forest no talking. “AHHHHH!” Jenner triped. SHE HAS WOKEN UP A PERSON FROM THE DEAD. “RUN!!” Said jenner we have to go we made a bad Mistake going into the forest in the first place anyways. Running Through The dirt make a little noise running through the wrong way of the forest can not see where they are going NO!! Said jenner my teddy bear. Don’t go jenner the person is right there. Your right but my mum give me that teddy bear and she passed away and she is all I got I know this is a risk but I have to take it. Well ok? You can go but go get it fast.