This is my story about The Book called Tautai. It was about a Little boy going to school and he had some friends and they had nicknames. Alex - Bean, Robert - Hobbit and Lucas - Puke us. They all named Tigi'ilagi Stinky. it was mixed feelings in the book. ENJOY!
Hi there Mapa
ReplyDeleteThis is your cousin Daniel from May Road School, I like how you wrote of how Tigi'ilgai felt in the story like how he felt like he didn't feel confident because the friends were mean to him. Also at the end you explained how he got more confident because he got to go on an plane to go to his grandparents 60th birthday and how he went to the pilots place on the plane. There are some mistakes you have made like you said it was the grandparents 16th birthday and you wrote Samoa as samoa, and that's all I just want to say. Good job
Kind Regards: Daniel
Hey Daniel
DeleteThanks for your Kind Comment and how you spotted out my mistakes I made durring my writing. I spotted out your Comment too and you made a Mistake and it's alright and thank you very much
From: Kind Cousin