Hi there fellow viewers
Welcome to my blog post about my haiku poem. Today I felt bored so I hoped on to the Summer learning journey website. I had a little bit of a read for the haiku poem so I could do one. I watched the video of how to embed you draw on to your blog but PNG. I loved my haiku poem because my poem tells you to reach for your goals but this year hasn't been so good. The lockdown was hard for us human beings because we had to stay at home and clearly thats really bad because what if you want to go for walks but you couldn't because of the corona virus. My next learning steps are to kick up the posts by making my posts interesing.
Question: Was this year hard for you and your family?
Kia Ora Mapa,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Charlotte again, a commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I think the haiku you created was very creative and awesome!
I think that it is amazing that you have been able to take something good out of the lockdown! I agree, that goals are very important and I think it’s great that you used them as inspiration for your haiku!
Have you ever written a haiku before? I think they are heaps of fun to write! What did you like best about this task?
NgΔ mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey
Hi there mapa I like your poems cause they are all about achieving your goals
ReplyDeleteand making next steps kind regards Fossie
Kia ora Mapa. What an awesome haiku with a very positive message. This year sure was hard. It think it's even harder for my family because they are in England and are still in lockdown! Did you have a go at the Ako Hiko Poetry Slam this year? If not the link is here.
ReplyDeleteHi Mapa. This is Razan and yes definitely it was a hard year for everyone, as you know I lost my mum during Covid. But we all should set new goals and look positive to make the next steps to achieve them. Good job and looking forward to see more of your work.
ReplyDeleteHi there, Razan
DeleteThanks your for your wonderful comment. 2020 was really hard from all those germ that flew past us. its now 2021 and things got worser. but yes thanks for your comment. Stay safe
-Mapa
Hi there Mapa its Seralia and I like your poem it shows that you have been doing the summer learning Journey great job kind regards
ReplyDeleteHi there, Seralia
Deletethank you for your lovely comment. thank you also for giving me the heads up like when u said "great job", thanks for that
-Mapa
Hi Mapa remember me your favorite year 6 it's me Shamili I just had a look at you post it's awesome love it!!!!!!!. What I love more about it that you made it about reching your goles because at my first day at intermediate was scary I did'nt know anyone but I found some awesome friends and a great teacher too . So now Iam ready to reach out for my goals and you should be to . Heres some advice never be afrid to reach out to your dreams and if some makes you like a nothing just know that kno can make you feel imperia not without your consent okey. So I want you to have a great year enjoy it because you will have it once . About your question my family really found it hard because my mom just got here first job and then we went in to lockdown !!! so great job and great day enjoy it blog ya later !!!!!! .
ReplyDeleteHi there, Shamili
ReplyDeleteWOW I CANT BE REAL, its you. well hey there. its been years since we've talked but hope your doing well in school. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Also thanks for the advice u gave me. Im now a year 6 and it might been hard for me because I'm going intermediate but yeah thanks!!. I hope your staying germ free from all those germs. Stay safe!
-Mapa